Showing posts with label My Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label My Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, October 19, 2017

Still Around

Sometimes I forget that this was where I first started blogging. I know I should update it more, and now that I'm no longer working full time I'll try to do so.

Both girls are out at college and seem to be doing great. It's so hard to tell though. One day the world is an amazing place, the next everything is stupid. I hate to tell them, but that's life.

The boys are enjoying the peace of having the house all to themselves. Adam keeps busy with band and theater (seriously he's never home!) and Cole has started making stop motion movies. It's amazing to see how completely different all four of my children are.

Nathan still has a job. :) Seriously though, with layoffs the last few years we are grateful for that. He has to travel more, but at least he is doing what he enjoys.

Me? Well, after 8 months working at a job I ended up loving, with some amazing ladies I will never forget, I'm back at home. This first week has been a busy one as I recently got my publishing rights back for Talia's series. That means new cover art, new interior design, cut scenes have been replaced, and once it's live on Amazon I can start the process of getting it on Audible. I'm super excited.

Want to see the new covers? These were all designed by Tamara Hart Heiner who is also an amazing author.





I'll be re-releasing the first two in the series sometime the first week of November. Demon Rising is about half way finished, but this amazing cover has inspired me to get writing again. My goal is to have it out by fall of 2018.

It feels so good to be excited about writing again!

What do you think of the covers? I have to admit, I'm a bit in love with them. Maybe to an obsessive point.

I'll try and get pictures of the family for the next post.

Friday, May 19, 2017

Time is Flying By Way Too Fast

Where has this year gone?

Shortly after the girls left for mission and college, I started working for our POA (Property Owners Association). I love all the people I work with. We have a great time. The job itself is customer service and full of procedures that make my heart happy. Seriously, it keeps my OCD under control in a way never possible with substitute teaching.

The girls are both home. Kiah is working full time and saving for when she goes out to school this September with Ashlee. We are waiting for Ashlee to follow suit.

The boys are out of school as of this week. I don't know what they will do all summer with me working. I already miss our pool days and we haven't even reached that point of the summer yet.

Nathan has survived all the layoffs at Walmart so far. He recently was moved to a new area/team that he is excited about. In his free time at home, he still refinishes furniture sometimes, and we built a room in the garage for the girls to stay in. This weekend he's putting a shower in the half bath that's already down there.

Since I'm working, there isn't a lot of time to write, but I'm taking all the little steps I can, whenever I can. This month I released my first clean romance under a pen name. Nathan doesn't understand why I used a non de plume. It isn't because I'm embarrassed or anything. On the contrary, I'm really excited about it. However, I chose to use a pen name for romance so that any future readers will know what to expect. If everything was under "Charity"they would have to figure out if it was contemporary romance or science fiction/fantasy. This way, there is no doubting what they get. It makes for happy readers and that's what's important.

So, if your interested, check out the new author website River Ford Romances. There is also a goodreads giveaway right now where you can win a signed copy of the book.

Better yet, sign up for the newsletter and get the first 3 chapters free!


Saturday, November 1, 2014

My Next Novel is Coming Soon With Your Help!


Today is November 1st!

That means National Novel Writing Month (Nano for short) has started. Some of you may know that my first published novel, THE MAGIC WAKES, started as a Nano project in 2008. This year I'm continuing to edit the second novel in the series AND get the third one drafted for Nano. Wish me luck!

As if that wasn't enough to keep me busy, I'm actively working to get another novel ready for publication. I'm joining the ranks of Indie Publishers with my Urban Fantasy titled FADE INTO ME. This book also started with Nano.

Nanowrimo 2011 was the only year I didn't explore Talia's world. Instead I met a troubled girl named Ryanne. She had secrets I didn't want to uncover, but her desperate need to be loved in spite of her scars kept drawing me back to her. I finally finished her story in 2013. Early this year I dug into revisions with a drive I hadn't felt since THE MAGIC WAKES (WiDo Publishing, 2013).

I was on fire.

FIM has been through multiple beta readers and grown into something I never could have planned. Some people will love it. Others won't get it. It's about a co-dependent girl who protects those who hurt her and runs from those who can make her whole.  Her reactions and inner struggles are based on similar ones of many women I've met in my life. All of us had to learn we are worthy of love and embrace those who knew too.

This month I'm running a kickstarter to pay for a professional editor and typesetter. With any luck, I'll make my goal and this book will be available early next year. Please take a moment to watch my video about the project. The book trailer is at the end. Then think of it this way, a $12 pledge is like pre-ordering a signed print copy of FADE INTO ME. I will be selling the print copy for $12 on Amazon and other places when it's available, but it won't be signed!

Thanks in advance for any support you can give. Even if that's just tweeting, facebooking and telling your neighbors and family about the project.

Blurb:

Aliens live among us. Their purpose: to protect and nurture their greatest mistake—mankind.

Caedan Frey’s family has fulfilled this duty for thousands of years, but it doesn’t free him from his obligation as prince of the Reparation. Although he doesn't believe humans will evolve to see the magic, much less control it, he has two months to marry one or face the wrath of the High Council. Bitter about a responsibility he thinks prevents him from marrying for love, he figures any human girl will do. He's ready to propose when his soul mate stumbles into—and right out—of his arms.

Human, Ryanne Killian might be his one shot at happiness while still fulfilling his duty. Unfortunately, she guards a dark secret within her co-dependent personality, and she thinks the only way to protect Caedan is to push him away.

Caedan must convince her she’s worthy of his love before the men who hurt her before steal more than her virtue. If she can see her own worth, she just might save herself and his people.



What do you think? Does it sound like something you'd read?
Click HERE to read the first 2 chapters.

Early Praise for FIM--

Fade Into Me was a remarkable read. I couldn't put it down! Bradford writes the story with so much conviction, I wondered if she was trying to tell us all something about the human race. The book is clean and well written. The character building hooked me from page one. The author's imagination helps make the book come to life. I give the book a 5 out of 5 rating! Great read for all audiences! I can't wait for others to be able to discover this new Urban Fantasy!
~Alicia Rivoli - Author of The Enchantment Series

I love the glimpse into two different worlds and can't wait to see how they collide! I have a clear picture in my mind as I read, I can't help but visualize Caeden's world-not something I can usually do in the first chapter of a book. I'm only disappointed I can't read the rest yet!
~Trish

Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Stellar Cloud is now Available!

I finished my short story anthology! My brother-in-law, Zak Whittington, designed an amazing cover for me, and I've posted it on Amazon. It's only available for Kindle at the moment, but there you go.

Here is a quick one line or two about the stories you'll find inside.

The Rising
A soldier struggles with the emptiness left behind by amnesia until he learns he is more than the world would have him remember.

The Sleeper
The earth is desolate, and only one lonely ship of humans remains. They circle the solar system sending down one man every twenty-five years to see if the planet is habitable.

Continuation
A woman must choose between a slow death from old age or submitting herself to the Continuation process. But does she really have a choice?

Earth 4
A husband and wife may keep secrets, but this one could put an end to all of their dreams or be the beginning they longed for.

Exiled
An assassin plays god, dealing out justice and mercy as he sees fit. When he’s put through the same process will he think it was merciful?

Instinct
A mother’s instinct may be the only thing that can keep her alive on a deadly new planet.

STELLAR CLOUD is so new that there are no reviews on Amazon yet. If the stories pique your interest, grab a copy ($1.99) and please post a review for me. I'd love to know which was your favorite story and why.

Thanks!

Thursday, August 1, 2013

July 2013

I can't believe an entire month has passed by so quickly! To be honest, I'm not even sure what we did in July. The girls had Girl's Camp and Youth Conference in June and July, Adam had his last year at Cub Scout Day camp, and then we traveled to TN for two weeks.

There were a few things in between in there, but mostly we've just been busy trying to see everyone and relax in between.

Nathan has now lost a total of 25 lbs, and I was half a pound away from 20 before leaving for TN. My only hope now is that I didn't gain too much while traveling. There are just too many tempting foods at my mom's house!

While in TN I did a book signing at Hastings. Of course I forgot my camera, but Adam took this picture for me with my phone.
I think I sold 7 books that night. However, the fun part was seeing some good friends from high school. Thanks Adam, Elise and Jen for being there!

Thursday, January 10, 2013

Look what came in the mail today!

I was perfectly fine for about two hours, and then the delayed reaction hit me while I was driving to the post office. Tears of gratitude just wouldn't stop. I'm such a baby! I feel so blessed to be living my dream.

Thursday, January 3, 2013

Happy New Year 2013!

The new year is starting well and on track. Nathan and I have signed up for a 1/2 marathon here in Arkansas in an effort to get moving after sitting still for so long. It's HARD! My body doesn't want to move.

We are also going to start some new family goals. Actually we're going to do a family Theme for the first time ever. Our theme for 2013 is...

No Regrets!

It's based on President Uchtdorf's Saturday Morning October 2012 conference talk, Of Regrets and Resolutions. Nathan and I feel its a perfect time to strengthen our family while encouraging our children to work toward their potential. It doesn't hurt that in doing so we will be growing closer to our own potential in the process.

Once a month we will have a special Family Home Evening based on the talk. There are 3 regrets covered and we will take a quarter of the year for each. The plan is to discuss the regret, talk about the distractions that keep us from obtaining it, and then plan specific ways to change that area of our lives so we will not have that particular regret. Some months will just be a "checking in" kind of FHE to see if we are still on track.

I'll try to remember to share the FHE lessons here as I get them organized. ;)

Finally, we mailed about 50 Christmas cards and letters this year but several came back undeliverable. I'm going to include our family letter here in case you missed it.
Counting our blessings, that’s our theme for this Christmas. 2012 turned out to be more eventful than we originally hoped. Here’s a quick list of highlights:

March—we bought a puppy! His name is Chewy, and he’s fluffy and oh so loveable.
April—family camping trip to Jellystone (lots of rain and memories). Charity signed a book contract, The Magic Wakes releases in February!
June—4 out of the 6 of us spent a week at Cub Scout camp
July—Nathan, Kiah and Charity went on a pioneer trek for youth conference
Aug—Girl’s camp, 2 birthdays, an anniversary, and a trip to TN
Sept—Anniversary cruise to Grand Caymans and Cozumel to celebrate our 16th anniversary Oct—Nathan accepted a job from Walmart and we started the moving process. Found buyer for home one week after listed house on the market. Said goodbye to our dear friends and family in Charlotte, NC—we love and miss you all!
Nov—We relocated to Northwest Arkansas (Bentonville) and started to settle in
Dec—Closed on our home in Charlotte and hope to enjoy our first Christmas in Bentonville

It has been a wonderful year full of so many blessings. We hope the New Year will bring as many wonderful blessings and memories as this year—we just hope a move won’t be involved. We love you all and wish you a merry Christmas!

The Bradfords

Wednesday, December 9, 2009

yWriter

A month or so ago I fell in love with a lovely little writing program called Scrivener . Unfortunately, it is only available for use on Macs and I have a PC. Now, my first computer that I bought with my very own money was an Apple, and I loved it. However, when I married my dear husband we switched back to the PC life. I'm not going to get into the whole Mac vs. PC discussion here because I can see positive things about both (that is just my nature!), but I've been pining over this program. So I have looked at Mac laptops for a month trying to convince myself that I could justify the cost of one so I could use Scrivener to become a famous author. *sigh*

I did not quite succeed. Cool tools will not write my book for me or make it entertaining enough to make me famous. The work will be all mine to do regardless of how pretty a program I run on my computer. However, I keep losing my old style index cards, which means I can't keep track of the secrets that I have already revealed, who knows about it and when did I do that? That may not make sense, but I know my story inside out and I have to know where the characters learned certain things in order to keep the story flowing properly. I've also moved things around so many times in my document that it is very easy for me to get lost in its 200+ pages. I liked using the index cards to keep track of the scenes and goals because I could move them around to find the best places for them in my story. Now, back to the cool programs...

Scrivener has this visual cork board that works in the same way as my index cards. Each card corresponds to a chapter or scene in the book, and here is the cool part...when you move the cards around on the board, it moves the scene in your book for you! No more cut and paste and oops, now that scene is in their twice! Just typing about it makes me excited. Anyway, I do need a laptop, or at least I want one desperately, but I can afford a PC long before a Mac. So, in an effort to let go of my desire for the lovely visually pleasing Scrivener---I downloaded the free yWriter program--My heart was not fully behind this little experiment, but I knew that I needed to get better organized to finish the final revisions of Sendek, and that is where my heart is right now. So, I've been playing with this program and plugging in the scenes of my book. It does all the same things that Scrivener does, but it is the stripped down all business version...and I like it. It keeps track of who is in each scene, timelines, POVs, word counts, whether it is action or reaction scenes, goal for the section, location, items of importance in the scene, etc. I can still move things around and I think I can print the whole book from here as well. Still need to play with that.

Of course I've also been a wreck wondering if I've just set my computer up to be hacked or my story stolen. Yes, the last may seem like a silly worry, but I have years invested in this story and it means a lot to me. There were lots of good reviews online for the program, but how do I know if those reviews are legit? The only review from a source I recognized can be found at PCmag-- Click Here .

I'll keep you posted!

Tuesday, December 1, 2009

November Lessons



Yay! My family survived another month of NaNoWriMo and I think everyone is glad it is over. My eyes are more than a little strained from so many late nights staring at my computer screen in a dark room. Yeah, I know better, but it is a design flaw in our house. My desk is in the boys bedroom/family room and the best time to write was when everyone was asleep.

I am also very proud of my fellow Nano friends. Out of the 48 who posted regularly on our forums, 25 of them met the 50K goal! I'm sure there were many others that did it all on their own.

There were several really good moments and scenes in this year's writing challenge for me. And a lot of mediocre blah writing that makes me cringe. About week three I lost total interest in the story and all I wanted to do was return to my other book and continue revisions, but I was a good girl and pressed on! My main goal with this book was to get to know my antagonist. For those of you who have read Sendek, be prepared for some nice revisions in the next month or so! Now that I know their complete history, I was able to find ways to show how wicked and scary they could be. That was lacking in the first book, but now I can go back and fix that. A little more grit and tension will be a good thing. Because of this, I feel like I had a triple success this year. I made it to 50,050 words in a month, finished a story line (even if I am going to trash it) and learned what I needed to know about another group of my characters. It feels good do get my little winners badge. Anyone want to join me next year?



We also had a great Thanksgiving. I enjoyed cooking our meal and I've posted about it on the food blog, you can see my menu HERE. Mmm, what else have I forgotten to blog about? I can't remember since my brain is still fried from November as a whole.

Oh, we have started decorating for Christmas and the kids took their "under the tree" picture. I don't know why they love this so much, but they do.

Monday, November 23, 2009

Is this too gruesome?

Ok, my brain hurts and I'm stalling instead of writing. So I thought I would post another excerpt from this year's Nano project. Here is a section that I actually like even if it is still a first draft with room for improvement.

As Qatja envisioned her hands around the man’s neck, Qualz jumped up from his seat and leapt across the space separating him from the council member who had just spoken. She let her body relax and she channeled the feel of the skin beneath Qualz’s hands as he choked the life out of the man. Other members of the council began to scream, some tried to pry Qualz off of their peer but found themselves the next victim of his anger.

One of the guards began firing his weapon at the three Draguman. It was a primitive projectile style weapon that was strong enough to knock Qualz off of his feet bruising the muscles under the tough scales, but not strong enough to penetrate and leave lasting damage. Quyl quickly killed the guard and tossed his weapon to the ground. He too had missed the feel of battle. There were ten more Nibiru in the room and he decided to enjoy himself.

Qatja went for the woman first. Her smugness had irritated her and she relished the fear in her eyes as she grabbed a hold of her. Qatja was crueler than Qualz or Quyl. She did not kill the woman quickly with a quick twist of the neck, instead she ran her taloned fingers down the length of her arms until the skin spit open and the blood flowed freely. She inhaled deeply and let the blood flow over her hands. The warm wetness had a sweet smell beneath the tanginess of iron. Qatja brought her fingers to her lips and tasted the blood. It was surprisingly good, and although she would not really eat another sentient being, she found great pleasure in allowing the woman to think that she would. The counsel woman screamed as Qatja ripped her arm out of its socket. She began to cry as it hung limply by her side, held on only by the skin.

“Does it hurt? Oh, I’m so sorry about that. I promise to make it stop soon.” Qatja wanted to relish the feel of the warm blood pumping under the thin skin of the woman’s neck. She had wrapped her hands around the slender neck and she could feel the pulse beating quickly against her thumbs. She began to squeeze slowly and steadily so that she could feel each beat as it struggled to keep moving beneath her until she could feel the windpipe as well. She paused long enough to see the terror building in her victims eyes.

“Qatja don’t play with it that is cruel.” Quyl stood beside her waiting for her to finish.

“Oh, all right.” Closing her eyes she applied enough pressure to close off the air flow and she held it until the pulse stopped.

To view my monthly progress report Click Here.

Saturday, November 21, 2009

Writing through the month

This month has really had its ups and downs with my new story. It started so well and then I hit a point where I really did not like my story very much. Now, you may ask, "If you don't like your story, why keep writing?" My answer? I didn't like last year's story at one point either because Nano gives me the opportunity to get the bones on the paper. This means a lot of telling, a lot of listing of events, and a lot of fast dialogue. When I glance at what I've written I cringe because it lacks good character development, good descriptions and depth of emotion to pulls me into the story. I have to keep telling myself that the story line is still good, the plot ideas are good. I simply need to get everything down so that I can come back and fill in the gaps.

Tonight I went to another write in. There were five of us sitting around a table and typing furiously for two hours. Nothing compares to the sound of imaginations clicking away and that creative energy swells and envelops you. The last few days of drudging through scenes faded away and I found myself once again moving through the plot. In two hours I invaded a planet, fought some major battles, committed genocide through blind rage and the desire for revenge and then discovered that I was on the wrong planet! Oh the guilt at all those deaths! My main character fell into a deep depression leaving himself open to the influence of the manipulative woman that had been trying to pull his strings all along. Does it make me an awful person to say that I am enjoying the story more now that they have started on a destructive rampage through space?

Another plus to write ins is that I managed almost 3000 words! That is really amazing for me and it makes me wonder what else I could accomplish in two hours with no kids crawling all over me and asking for things. So, today's word count reached 37,004. I am back on track, and just a little bit ahead of where I need to be. The best part is that I am now engaged in the story again so I am looking forward to writing tomorrow.

Friday, November 13, 2009

Crossing THE MIDDLE (duh duh duuuhh!)

I finally got around to reading my week two pep talk from Maureen Johnson and I found that her advice for writing can apply to many other areas of my life. She begins by talking about Australia and how it is about the same size of the United States, but everyone lives along the coast. This means that there is about 2000 miles of nothing in "the Middle" and that is where all the things that can kill you live.

"Here’s the thing, though...if you're doing NaNoWriMo, you are a reader, because all writers are readers. Which means that you must admire many authors. Your shelves are lined with the works of your heroes and sheroes. Every single one of them has crossed the wild country where you are now. Every single one of them has been a resident of The Middle. The ground you're treading is full of the remains of their old campsites. And somewhere around you, just out of sight, current authors you admire are making their own way across The Middle. What's nice about NaNoWriMo is that you are traveling with a posse of thousands, all of you making your way over the mountains, through the valleys, across the creeks. You are fighting off the beasties.

And once you've crossed The Middle once or twice and you're lounging on the other side, you'll find you miss it. You'll realize you long to be out there again, under the sky and the stars. The weather changes a lot in the middle. Some days, the skies are dark and it's hard to find your way forward. Those days are long and little progress is made. Some days, it's strangely bright and clear, and suddenly you can see the horizon ahead, and dozens of possible paths present themselves to you. But every day is different, and every day there is a new way to go and a new thing to see."

Well, I am definitely entering the MIDDLE of my book and progress has slowed dramatically...duh duh duuuhhn, but hopefully it will not ground to a complete stop. This is the part of the book where everything happens and you would think that would be easier to write, but for some reason it isn't. I keep finding myself asking more questions (which is good) and turning back on the path I've chosen to try a different one. There are so many choices to make that it can be paralyzing.

I think we all cross the Middle several times in our lives, even if you are not trying to write a novel. I am now 35, definitely in the MIDDLE of this so called life. My kids are not grown, but they are not babies--the MIDDLE. We finally make enough money to pay the bills, but not enough to save very much each paycheck--please say this is the MIDDLE! And so on...but I love knowing that I have good friends all around me who are crossing the MIDDLE at the same time. Even on days when I hide at home and cannot see the progress, I know they are out their trudging through the sand dunes (or mud here in Charlotte), cutting past the vines of the jungles (poison ivy anyone?) and doing their best just like I am trying to do my best. Isn't it good to know that each day is filled with such wonderful opportunities?

For my fellow wrimos, see you when we make it to the beach!

Thursday, November 12, 2009

Week 2 Pep Talk

First, yesterday was an awful writing day for me. I was super busy and did not get a chance to sit down at the computer until 9:30pm and of course then I spent 1/2 an hour catching up on emails. Blah! I really wanted to write something but I was so frazzled from my long day that I really could not focus my mind. I gave up, shut my computer off, and headed to bed. When I entered my room, my plans were thwarted once again. My hubby was taking a shower and so I could not change or brush my teeth and therefore I could not go to sleep.

I sat at my husband’s desk and just stared at the wall. Finally, I grabbed my trusty yellow notebook and my favorite pen. I did not want to type on the computer, but I realized that I did want to write. I love how the words flow from my pen. I would probably be a much better writer if I always wrote with pen instead of the computer, but who wants to sit and decipher the artistic script when it is all said and done? I write small, cramped and often half-formed cursive that requires the intelligence of a detective to read. I decided a few pages of written word would be worth sludging through if it moved my word count up for the day.

With pen poised, I thought of where my typed manuscript left off. Even though I knew where I was and where I needed to go, that part of the story shyly eluded me, but another part jumped up and down screaming for my attention. At the kick off party someone asked if those of us present wrote in chronological order or skipped around. Until this week, I was a chronological kind of gal. Last night I veered off and wrote the last few paragraphs of my story. I’m very excited about them and now I have a beginning to my story and the end. Now I just have to write all that middle stuff.

I just finished typing last nights work and am proud to report that I managed 15K before midnight on Monday. Isn’t that what Chris Baty and crew were aiming for last night? So, when you get stuck, don’t give up, try something new just to keep you moving!

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Nano Week 1 Pep Talk

I know I have not been great about blogging lately, but I have been writing tons of stuff. I figure I might as well share some of it with you. Here is last week's pep talk that I wrote for my fellow Charlotte Nanowrimos. I am finding that I really enjoy getting to encourage other people to try their best and keep writing for the sheer enjoyment of it. Do you remember my post on "Our Greatest Fear?" I feel like I have let some of my fear go for the moment and I am finding a new freedom and ease with my writing. There have even been a few shining moments that I can't wait to share!

Anyway, if you ever think about writing any kind of book, I hope this will help you in your journey.

"We are now five days into Nanowrimo, how are you feeling? Have you entered the slump or are the words still flowing freely from your fingertips? No matter where you are at the current moment, we will all experience some ups and downs over the next three weeks. I for one did not sleep at all last night. I kept thinking about my current Nano novel, last year’s novel which is in final revisions, and some strange new ideas that kept screaming for my attention. I finally got out of bed and started writing the non-related ideas down to shut them up for a while.

I was also thinking about how I could help keep you motivated when I am nearing a critical point in my story. Two things kept parading around my mind that I want to share with you. These two things help me keep a steady word count throughout the month, even when I am completely baffled about what should happen next.

1. Always end your writing on a high note. By this, I simply mean stop writing at a point when you have a good idea what is going to happen next. If you end when you are blocked, you will dread starting again because mentally you will prepare yourself to continue being stumped. However, if you end at a point in your story where you know what comes next you will be eager to start writing on the next day.

For example, Tuesday I wrote a scene where Elvin asks his father permission to marry Della, his step-sister (no blood relation) and is refused on the premise that she has been promised to another in order to settle a debt. Elvin does not take no for an answer and when the two are being chased by several men from the village Della is injured. Elvin is so angered that he draws upon his talents as an apprentice Mage and almost kills the men. He is stopped by his best friend who happens to be a dragon. Jenska, the dragon, carries the two humans back to Elvin’s mentor. My last line for the day was as follows:

“When they flew into view of the cottage, they could see Olec standing in the yard waiting for them.”

This was a perfect place to stop because all I had to do was re-read that sentence and my imagination could just go with the ensuing dialogue. So if you are experiencing writer’s block, how do you get out of it so you can stop writing for the day?

2. Use Pacing and Questioning. When I find that I have written myself into a corner and I can not find my way out, I set my main character to pacing. I just write about him/her wandering somewhere confused. Then I start the character monologing asking, “How did I get here? This is not where I planned to be, but now that I’m here, how do I get out of this situation?”

I simply write every idea that my character can think of until I hit upon the right path for him. You will not usually need many words to get yourself moving again. If you feel this is “cheating” you can always delete that section after you “find your way”, but when I started revising last year’s novel I found some of the rambling questions invaluable to making my story better.

I hope this will help you keep writing. Just remember to lock away that inner editor (mine has already reared her ugly head and I had to smack her around a bit to get her back in the cage), and just enjoy creating something that only you can create."

Monday, November 2, 2009

The opening to my next noveling adventure.

Just remember that the goal of Nanowrimo is to write furiously with no editing or revising until December, so there will probably be lots of things in here that don't work. That will be the work of the next year. :) Oh, set up...this will be the sequel/prequel to "Sendek" and will chronicle the creation, exile and space travels of the Draguman (who were the invading enemy in the first book.) It will start as a fantasy feeling book and then progress to science fiction. The blending of the two genres seemed to work for me with the last book.

Draguman

A small shaft of suns light drifted into the mountain crevice exposing a glittering rock. Elvin’s sharp eyes saw the sparkle and decided that he wanted that rock for Della. The sunlight made it sparkle the way her eyes did when she grew excited about something. Using his toes to find good purchase, he scaled down the rock face into the crevice. Kneeling by the stone he noticed how strange it was, and how different from the other rocks around it. The oval stone was about thirteen to fifteen inches long and perfectly smooth. Elvin worked his fingers under the rock and picked it up.

Although it was heavy, it was not as heavy as he thought it should have been. The sun had warmed it and as soon as he touched the smooth surface, he felt the electricity he associated with living things coming from within the stone.

“It must be an egg, but what animal lays such a large egg?” He was bewildered and excited all at the same time. Elvin looked around and could see no sign of a nest or any animal tracks. His curiosity was peeked, and he now turned to thought of how to get this egg home without his step mother seeing it. First, he needed to find a way to climb out of the crevice and carry the egg. Looking around did not offer an easy way to accomplish that task, so Elvin decided to place the egg back in the shaft of suns light until he could return with a sack. The egg wanted to roll a bit so he carefully secured it with some of the smaller rocks, then turned and climbed back out of the crevice. Elvin ran home as fast as he could. He was about to slip up to his room above the stable when his father came around the backside of the stable.

“Where have you been boy? The horses are standing in their own filth.” He tossed a pitch fork to Elvin before continuing, “get in there and get to work. I’ve never seen a more useless boy in my life.”

“Yes Sir.” Elvin ducked passed the man glaring at him and entered the cool darkness of the stable. He loved the smell of the horse’s warm bodies. The musty hay and wood mingled with the manure and made him want to sneeze. He actually enjoyed the hard work, but as his muscles bent, lifted and moved the filth out of the stalls, his mind was in the mountains thinking about the egg. He knew he would not be able to get it before nightfall and he hoped it would not hatch before he could retrieve it.

Later that evening after eating his small dinner, he finally managed to get up to his room. He did not own much, but it was all in the loft above the horses. Their bodies helped warm the stable and the hay made a nice place to sleep. He looked at the threadbare quilt that his mother had made for him the year she died. The colors were faded, but he could still feel her lingering warmth and love whenever he ran his fingers over the threads. His other possessions consisted of a bird’s nest, the skin shed by a snake, some leaves pinned on the wall and a red knapsack that Della had given him for his fourteenth birthday last year. He kept it hidden for fear that his stepmother would take it away from him for her own use if she ever saw it.

Della was only a year younger than Elvin and the only reason Elvin had not run away from home. She was his stepmother’s daughter from her first marriage, and the most beautiful and kind person he had ever met. He did not mind moving into the barn so she could sleep in his old room. Whenever his stepmother complained about him, Della was the one to stick up for him even though it should have been his father to do that. He had never been able to give Della anything to show his appreciation for her kindness to him and that is why he had wanted the sparkling stone. Now he was just as determined to retrieve the egg and see what would hatch. Maybe it would make a great pet for Della.

He picked up the red knapsack and hung it over his shoulder before climbing back down the ladder. It was dark outside but Elvin did not need a light to find his way through the forest to the edge of the mountain range. His bare feet could feel the path that he had traveled so many times. His father was trying to make a farmer out of him, but his heart and soul was in the forests and mountains learning all he could about the creatures that lived on Sendek. One day he would find a way to live on his knowledge and then he would ask Della to marry him. He just had to be patient and keep his eyes open for the right opportunity.

Most boys his age might have been afraid to be alone in the wild in the darkness, but Elvin was not like any other boy around. He loved his time alone with nature; it was what made him feel complete. The rocks of the mountains were still warm from the suns’ light. They felt nice on his cold toes as he began climbing. The first of three moons rose before he reached the crevice, followed shortly by the other two. They were very close together at this time of the year and once they were all up, it was almost as bright as day. He did not have any trouble finding the crevice with the egg hidden in it.

Once again he climbed down into the dark whole and easily found the egg by it’s warmth. He placed it carefully in the knapsack and turned it so that it rested on his back before beginning the climb back up. The egg grew heavier, but it also kept him warm now that the air had turned colder. When he reached the top of the crevice, he felt the egg move a little in the knapsack. His heart fluttered excitedly with that small movement. Whatever it was, it was alive and he hoped it would not be long before it hatched.

As he took his time walking home, Elvin thought of all the hiding places near his home. He would need to find a warm place to hide the egg, somewhere safe from the other forest animals and close enough for him to reach quickly. He would also need to find a way to know when it was hatching. Several times in the past, Elvin had concentrated on an animal while looking at it and thinking of what he wanted. When he walked away, he had still been able to feel the animal’s presence in his mind. He decided to try this with the egg when he hid it. <

At the base of the mountain trail was a large boulder. Years ago, Elvin had hollowed out a basin in the top to collect water. He decided that would be a good place to put the egg. Most creatures that could damage the egg would be unable to see or reach it and the suns light would still be able to warm it. The rainy season was over so after he splashed the water out it would not fill back up for a while. After clearing out the water, he took the egg out of his knapsack and placed it in the basin.

It was just as beautiful in the moons’ light as it was in the suns’ light. He placed his hands on the sides of the egg and let the warmth flow through his fingers. Concentrating on the life energy he could feel coming through the hard shell, he let his mind drift until he could almost see the energy. He focused his thoughts into the shell searching for the brightest spark of the energy. He was not sure if that spark was the brain or heart, but he knew that if he could find that place he would be able to form a connection with the creature growing inside. When he found the brightest point of light, he wrapped his mind around it, sent some of his energy to that spot, and was surprised to feel the creature reach back into his own mind. This being was intelligent and had magical abilities of its own. Elvin only knew of one creature that would lay an egg this large and be as sentient as what he was feeling—a dragon. He had found a dragon egg!

Elvin’s mind raced with the possibilities. If he could raise the dragon, he could take it on tour and earn a living by showing it to people in the villages. He would make a fortune and then Della would marry him for sure, but he must keep it safe until then. He carefully covered the egg with his knapsack and hurried home for a few hours of sleep before his father put him to work again.

Thursday, October 15, 2009

Words that mean the world to me...

Nathan finally read and completed my book today. I've been on pins and needles ever since he started because his is the opinion that means the most to me. I want to post what he wrote to his family on our myfamily site. Now, even if nothing ever happens, and I'm never published, I will still be happy.

" I just wanted to brag a little on Charity. As many of you know she has been writing a book for a while now. Well she finished it not long ago, and so I started reading it so I could provide feedback. I just finished reading it today during my lunch break. I always knew Charity was super talented, but this book is really quite amazing.

"I am a picky reader (meaning, you better get me in the first few chapters or I don't keep reading), I found that I was totally into the story from beginning to end and sometimes would stop myself and think "my wife wrote this"--I didn't know what to expect when I started reading it, but it did not feel like an amateur book, but something that was really good that people would enjoy reading. It was even a sci-fi book (which I never read) and still found it to be awesome. I even like that she left part of it open for a second book (so that after we become super wealthy from the first book, we can become even more super wealthy from the second book :)

Anyway, I am just really, really impressed and wanted to brag a little about her. Hopefully after she does some more edits and revisions you will all get the chance to read it. Great job hun!!!!!!"

Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Sountrack for my book

I really wanted to post some of the songs that really pack some of the emotional inspiration for parts of my book. I did not however want to turn off my current playlist, so I posted the soundtrack on my food/running blog.

If you are curious, just go Here to read up on it and listen to some lovely love songs. And no, my book is not strictly a romance, but there is a thread running throughout that these five songs really fit well with.

I'm currently looking for some good rockin' tunes to listen to while I rework the battles and chases. If you have any ideas for good suspenseful, fear invoking, driving songs, please send them my way. This part of my book needs the most work and I could use some emotional inspiration to help get me in the right frame of mind. (I guess my life is too good to write about certain kinds of pain.)

Monday, September 14, 2009

Answers to life from a Writer's Perspective

Recently, I asked blogger/writer Kristi how she finds the time to write. Here is part of her reply--which I totally loved and took to heart. Ask my husband, I have spent hours writing almost everyday since Kristi wrote this post. And the best part? I'm making progress and my hubby helps clean the kitchen!

"The short answer. I don't. I make time. Which means I sacrifice lots of other things. Writing about life and experiencing it don't always go hand in hand. I wish I could tell you this isn't true. I wish I could say that all writers live in grey shingled beach houses, write bestselling novels in a weekend after the muse strikes, then spend the rest of their time gardening, buying used books, and falling in love in Italy.

If you know successful writers who live this life, please share. Because I really want this to be true.



In my world writing happens in ten minute segments stolen from very, long, overworked days. My writing happens with a four year old on my lap. A cat bawling under my window. The answering machine recording ten plus messages a day and a dozen people demanding that I need to do something for them right now! (Ok, so this helped me decide that it is alright if I don't answer the phone every time it rings. So if you call me and I don't answer, but for some reason you are sitting in my drive like a stalker and can see that I'm home because my van is there, please know that I am not avoiding you in particular. I've just decided to block out 9am-11am as my writing time and I am avoiding everyone. Leave a message and I'll get back to you...beep.)

I recently read an article where a very successful male author said the best way to write was to get in the zone. "Eliminate all distractions and pound out that book as fast as you can." I wonder if he's ever had to write a kissing scene while his four years screams from the bathroom "Can you wipe my bum?!?"

Yeah. That's my reality: laundry, bills, weeds and a whole lot of butt wiping. (Can you hear me laughing? This is so my life as well right now, except I ignore the weeds.)

The article goes on to say the best time to write is in the morning. "Get up early before everyone else in the house is awake." I already wake at five-thirty. It's not possible for me to rise any earlier since I teach night classes and am not home before 10 p.m. Which also eliminates writing late at night. (I'm lucky that I actually get more time to write at night as well as during the day--usually between 9pm-10:30 then I'm a good girl and go to bed so I can get up early and run in the morning.)

I'm not feeling sorry for myself here. (Okay, maybe just a little.) I'm just trying to be truthful. If you are a mother and a writer then you have to make the time to write everyday. Because nobody is going to give it to you. I guarantee it. That means a lot of other things in your life have to go. (Isn't that the truth about so many things in life?!)

For a lot of my writer friends, it's housework, lunch with the friends, or sunlight and showers. Just cast out the glamourous image of the writers life right now. Writing is a job. You can love it. You can need it. But until you treat it as a serious profession you have to do every single day you'll never "find" the time."


Tuesday, February 10, 2009

My writing world

I have been trying to work on my book off and on the last month and a half. I am making progress, slowly. I just don't get a lot of time to sit and work on it without the phone ringing, someone crawling in my lap, asking for a snack, needing help with homework, etc. By the time it is quiet enough for me to work it is late at night and I am tired! I'm not giving up though.

Yesterday I picked up a book that I requested from the library before Thanksgiving. Yes, it must be popular, or they only have one copy for my entire county. Whatever the reason for the long wait, I was glad to get it. It is Characters & Viewpoint by Orson Scott Card. I have always enjoyed his books and am now enjoying some great ideas on further developing my book by making my characters stronger.

After reading just the first two chapters I knew some of the things that I need to work on so I put the book down and did some writing. Now I think I have a really good beginning that will set the tone for the book and hopefully hook the reader.

*sighs* I have been trying to type this and Cole just keeps crawling all over me so it is hard to think straight. I guess that means I'm done for now.

Friday, November 7, 2008

The scariest post I've ever written.

Thank you to everyone who has already voted and posted a comment about writing. You confirmed what I had been thinking and that is what I needed to hear. Ok, I'm sitting here and my heart is beating so fast that I can barely stand it, but I need to get used to this so here it goes...

I am going to post the opening of my book. Just remember that this is still a draft and I'm not making any changes until the whole story is on paper. I am interested in feedback though. Questions, suggestions, even if you just don't get it. I know that it will all help in the end. I'm just not used to letting people read my writing. My friend Laura is the only one who has read anything, and it included this passage.

"Talia awoke to the sound of screams. As she opened her eyes she saw a man sitting across from her. They were in a transport with heavily tinted windows. She looked closer at the man and could not remember ever meeting him.

“Who are you?”

“Lynel Geofrey. We’re going to die aren’t we?” The man barely whispered, making it hard for Talia to hear him over the screaming.

Talia moved over to the window to look out. She saw a crowded city street with tall buildings lining both sides. People were running in and out of buildings. Some of them dragging their children or pets with them, others seemed only concerned about themselves as they tried to escape whatever horror was following them. Most of the people were trying to get into transports, but even those who succeeded in that endeavor became grid locked before take-off. As she looked upward she saw thousands of transports bumping into each other as they tried to escape from the city.

A new sound came to her and she turned to look down the south end of the street. At first she could only hear a buzzing sound followed by short high pitched bursts, and then she began to see streaks of red light flying through the crowd. Each time she saw the light, people would explode into a fiery ball. She watched as the creatures came into view and vaporized every man, woman and child in the street.

Some transports managed to get away, but most were vaporized in just a few seconds. It was neat and clean, for a war. No blood, no mangled piles of burning metal. The buildings were not even damaged. Just dust falling through the air.

Talia waited inside the transport, praying that she would not be seen. But, once all life on and above the street had been wiped out, the creatures turned to her hiding place, and smiled. They know that I am here. They were looking for me. I am the prey they hunt.

A new terror took over and Talia’s only desire was to escape. She threw open the door and ran. The creatures aimed and fired. Talia burst into red and orange flames just before she melted into nothing."